Okay, please read the new deviation I posted called "Dear Vague" [link] . I really want some opinions on it because I've really never written anything like it before. I'm not even sure what to think of it myself. All I know is that it's either awful or amazing, but I'm not sure which. I want to be clear though, I want criticism about the writing, not about me or the other people in the piece.



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Rapturous Wrath [link] 7/11/04 by ~judaschrist
The Apparition Enters [link] 8/07/04 by ~judaschrist
Life Blooms Around Her [link] 3/30/09 by =AmarisSkye
I Still feel you Here [link] 4/13/09 by =AmarisSkye
Seeking her True Self [link] 4/13/09 by =AmarisSkye
Portrait of a Girl with a Past [link] 4/13/09 by =AmarisSkye

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Hidden Treasures [link] 4/24/07 by ~DigitalDreamers
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Lipgloss [link] 8/11/07 by ~Kayris06
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Elite Artists: End of Summer Special Edition [link] 8/30/07 by *EliteArtists

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Gas Masks Feature Part III [link] 10/27/07 by ~ShwarzEngel
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Weekly Features for February 2 [link] 2/2/08 by *SouthernMan
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morbidSTITCHES - Artisan Meme [link] 3/2/08 by =morbid-stitches
Demon Child [link] , Just Down the Road [link] , The Falsity of Black and White [link] , Lytch [link] , Cold [link] , and I am Plasma [link] in
Drawing Winner + [100D #24] [link] 3/21/08 by ~cpetten
I Have the Right [link] in
Submissions February '09 Part 2 [link] 2/20/09 by =Dark-Arts-Asylum
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Submissions April '09 Part 2 [link] 4/11/09 by =Dark-Arts-Asylum
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It's Overdose Time! [link] 4/30/09 by =Dark-Arts-Asylum
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Attention All Patients and Registered Visitors!!! [link] 8/29/09 by =Dark-Arts-Asylum
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7.9. 2009 FEATURES [link] 7/29/09 by *invisiblemartyr